Dream Deep

That was really good. It read like a song lyric, which made it even better. I really liked this. Here, I have to quote this: And why isn't it cohesive? ...

That was beautiful. Sheer, glorious... I don't know. Beauty. I loved it. Just one suggestion though. At the beginning, the piece seemed to flow, to rhyme in a very subtle ...

I know this is going to sound really weird, really new-agey, really strange. But it works. When you can't write, when you're having trouble and your creativity just isn't flowing, ...

If you need a good idea for a school composition or a good character sketch for a story, I suggest you try the Ideas Generator at

Okay. (I'm changing into my OBJECTVE LITTLE SISTER uniform now, just so you know). This is pretty good. But it doesn't flow. Here, see this? "Sir," Reyn puffed as he ...

The Writer's Digest at its finest. The articles are really starting to slack off, but at least I got 101 Best Websites for Writers out of it. I found the ...

WHAT WERE YOU THINKING? I kind of like how you write normally (I really liked "Your Third Eye") but seriously. I didn't get a word of that. I agree whole-heartedly ...

Thanks a lot, guys. I thought this was alright, but I knew it needed something different (added/fixed/killed etc). I appreciate the feedback 100% and I'm really glad that you (McPheever) ...

The smilies are awesome. :smt077 vs :smt051 . You could build a whole good-evil war with smilies. Cool. It's a good idea about the 50 pts = 200 words or ...

You wrote that very elegantly. I really liked it. I've never heard TOOL, but I think I know what you mean about the abstract weirdness of certain music helping you ...

The God spoke to the butterfly from his golden bridge on the World Edge, calling down to it through the sky. The butterfly heard His voice as it swam in ...

Pretty cool. I like to think I got all of that but what I got from it might not be at all what you meant. Chrystos Voskres 8)

That was so nice! :smt039 I'm so glad you enjoyed it. That's the point of writing, though isn't it?

Thanks, Clover. I really appreciate the comment. I wasn't sure that Certain Things was any good, but I'm so glad you think it worked out well. My brother couldn't even ...

I really thought that was wonderful. You have a really great writing voice. :)